杰瑞·韦的斯坦福录取申请案例 | 深度解析

    杰瑞·韦的斯坦福录取申请案例 | 深度解析

    斯坦福大学的录取一直以其严苛的标准和低录取率闻名。每年,成千上万的全球申请者争夺有限席位。在本案例中,我们将深入解析杰瑞·韦的完整申请材料,包括他精彩的个人论文、课外活动以及短回答内容,同时展示斯坦福招生官针对他的评价与录取决策。

    招生官评价与文件简介

    “杰瑞展现了强烈的学术动力和对计算语言学的深厚兴趣。他的申请体现了极高的知识活力(Intellectual Vitality)和创新性,尤其是在语言学和机器学习领域。他是本年度限制性早申请(REA)池中的最好之一。”

    完整申请表信息及成绩

    教育背景

    School: Oakton High School, Vienna, VA
    GPA: 4.826 / 4.0 (加权)
    Graduation Date: June 2021
    
    Additional College Course:
    Northern Virginia Community College (09/2019 - 06/2020)
    Completed college-level advanced math courses.
        

    测试成绩

    SAT: Total 1560
    - Evidence-based Reading and Writing: 770
    - Math: 790
    
    SAT Subject Test:
    - Math Level 2: 800
    
    AP Scores (11门科目满分5分):
    - Physics C Mechanics, English Language, Calculus BC, Statistics, Computer Science A,
      Music Theory, Chinese Language, World History 等
        

    课外活动清单

    以下是杰瑞列在申请表中的完整课外活动列表:

    • Research Intern:
      达特茅斯学院 (Dartmouth College), 10-12年级
      开发机器学习算法用于结直肠癌检测,并在顶级学术会议发表两篇论文。
    • Computational Linguistics:
      自主研究,10-11年级暑期项目
      创建20,000+文章数据集,用于检测政治新闻中的隐藏偏见; 研究项目最终在 Intel 国际科学与工程博览会 (ISEF) 上获得第4名。
    • Linguistics and Machine Learning Blog:
      10-12年级
      撰写20篇关于计算语言学和机器学习的博文,博客累计阅读量达 150,000 以上; 获选“Medium人工智能50位顶级博主之一”荣誉。
    • President of Machine-Learning Club:
      11-12年级
      领导俱乐部活动,涵盖机器学习在医学、个性化数据保护中的应用。
    • Powerlifting:
      9-12年级
      达到美国举重标准,以148磅体重达成个人纪录: 深蹲 275磅,卧推195磅,硬拉295磅。
    • Popeyes Cashier:
      高中12年级,总工时 15 hr/week during summer break
      暑期打工存学费。
    • Model United Nations Vice President:
      9-12年级
      领导10+模拟联合国会议规划,提高俱乐部参与率。
    • Member of ACL (Association of Computational Linguistics):
      参与讨论计算语言学研究,形成后续高校研究方向灵感。
    • Academic Coursework:
      完成Coursera和MIT课程 (例如:Neurolinguistics等)。

    完整个人作文:个人论文 (Main Essay)

    George Orwell didn’t just write dystopian novels, he also inspired me to apply my love for computer science in the most unexpected of places: studying linguistics. Let me elaborate—during my freshman year, I read 1984 and discovered the language of Newspeak, in which words such as “outstanding” and “wonderful” were replaced with unambiguous words such as “doubleplusgood.” By enforcing a limited vocabulary, Newspeak prevented the working class from thinking anything that diverged from the ruling party’s beliefs, essentially acting as a vessel to promote an implicit agenda. Through my morning routine of keeping up with the news, I noticed a trend in today’s news that was eerily similar to Orwell’s warning of linguistic totalitarianism. News sources often report on the same topic but present information in a way that only supports their own viewpoint, implicitly pushing their political agenda on readers. Soon I began to wonder: is there a way to identify how systemic and implicit biases manifest in today’s news? Strikingly, the answer came from another passion of mine—computer science. In my sophomore year, I took an online Coursera course on machine learning in which I learned about the recurrent neural network, a statistical model that could automatically discover linguistic patterns in large amounts of text. I thought the model could potentially help answer my question, so I set out to gather a large dataset that I could use to train it. Over the course of two weeks, I scoured the internet and compiled a dataset of over 20,000 articles about Donald Trump, one of the most polarizing topics in today’s news. Each article came from one of four major news sources that each represent different points on the political spectrum according to Media Bias/Fact Check, a recognized website that categorizes the biases of news organizations. Now that I had my dataset, I used differentiable programming tools to create a custom model in Python for my project, debugging over a dozen failed configurations in the process. In the end, my model successfully predicted a given news article’s source with 85% accuracy by detecting the article’s hidden political biases. Now that my model could accurately identify an article’s source, I coded a way to extract how much bias it associated with certain phrases of interest so that I could interpret the patterns that it had learned. I found that the phrases it perceived as biased matched with what humans would expect. For instance, the model recognized that, when referring to Trump, liberal sources tended to use phrases with negative connotations such as “Trump lost because he” and “Trump has a history of,” whereas conservative sources tended to use titles of respect such as “President” and “Commander-in-Chief.” In addition to the newest statistical models, I also analyzed my dataset using two methods from classical computational linguistics. One popular concept, the age of acquisition (AoA), measures the age at which words are typically learned (for example, the AoA of “run” is 4.5 years old while the AoA of “abscond” is 13.4 years old). I found that in my dataset, articles from conservative sources, which typically target older audiences, had a higher average AoA than articles from liberal sources. In terms of lexical diversity, the proportion of unique words in a text, I discovered that sources that were categorized as more biased used a smaller proportion of unique words in their articles relative to more-neutral sources. This may suggest that more-biased sources tend to narrowly select words that support their agenda. By using both the latest statistical models and more-traditional computational linguistics methods, I discovered new insights on how bias manifests in today’s news. Although George Orwell might not understand the mathematics behind my model, he certainly shares my sentiment about the importance of language. As technology continues to improve, I hope to continue searching for new ways to use computational methods for analyzing different types of biases in language.

    补充短回答 (Stanford Short Essays)

    Short Essay 1: 分享一个让你兴奋的学习经历

    2019 was the most exciting year in computational linguistics since the beginning of the field in the 1950s due to the development of an algorithm called BERT. By learning from the entire Wikipedia database of over 2.5 billion words, BERT has acquired a wealth of general information about language and therefore can be used to tackle new linguistic tasks with only a limited amount of data. Even I experienced the effects of BERT. Before BERT came out, I had conducted research on using machine learning to detect political bias in news articles, a project for which I had to spend four weeks collecting and processing twenty thousand articles in order to sufficiently train a machine learning model. In my next project, which I worked on after BERT came out, I analyzed questions that people asked online about COVID-19, but was only able to collect a few hundred questions for my dataset. Whereas previous machine learning algorithms could not be sufficiently trained with such a small dataset, using BERT, I was able to perform complex linguistic analyses with surprising accuracy, despite the limited amount of data. After witnessing BERT’s effects firsthand, I was both astounded and inspired by how a single idea can change the way we do research in computational linguistics. In the future, I will continue studying computational linguistics and hope to one day develop my own algorithm that can allow others to utilize the power of computational methods to more accurately and accessibly study linguistic phenomena.

    Short Essay 2: 写给未来室友的信

    Hi there, I’m stoked to room with you! My brother left for college when I was thirteen, so I’ve had my own room since then. It’s nice to get to have a roommate again. Here are some fun “me” facts… I adore computers and anything to do with them. You’ll probably see me arranging my custom computer setup on my desk and plugging in a bunch of wires everywhere (I’ll do my best to keep the wires from turning into a big heap of wire monster, but no promises). I love linguistics, and I’m interested in how our use of language affects how we perceive the world. I just finished reading Metaphors We Live By (which is about how we use metaphors to understand abstract concepts), and I am now reading Syntactic Structures, a classic linguistics book by Noam Chomsky, the father of linguistics. Hope you’re okay with seeing boxes of protein bars—I’ve been powerlifting (a type of weightlifting consisting of the bench press, squat, and deadlift) for about four years now. Feel free to lift with me sometime! Personality-wise, I’m an architect, like Michelle Obama and Elon Musk. Architects are “imaginative yet decisive” and “curious about everything but remain focused.” Spot-on—one time my cat was scratching my door while I was writing an essay, and I finished writing the entire essay before opening the door to see what he wanted. Turns out, he just wanted to hop onto my window sill to feel the cool breeze of fresh air.

    Short Essay 3: 对你有意义的东西以及原因

    One alarming discovery that I made while studying computational linguistics is that artificial intelligence algorithms can be implicitly biased as a result of hidden biases in the data that they are trained on. As a classic example, computational linguistics algorithms often associate the word “doctor” with “man” and “nurse” with “woman,” even though gender is not referenced in the definition of “doctor” or “nurse.” When algorithms with implicit biases make it into the real world, there are severe consequences. For example, Amazon developed an algorithm in 2014 that analyzed resumes to identify which job candidates to interview. A year after deploying it, however, Amazon found that the algorithm tended to select men because it had an implicit bias that women were less qualified than men for positions in the technology industry solely because of their gender. These biased algorithms troubled me not only because they had invaded my home territory of computational linguistics, but also because they challenged an ideal that I was raised to believe in—equal opportunity. As computational linguistics algorithms improve and take on larger roles in decision-making, I have a duty as an aspiring computational linguist to work on ensuring that our algorithms are fair and give everyone an equal opportunity. As I continue studying computational linguistics, I will also continue to analyze bias in algorithms. My current research has already shown that algorithms can discover implicit political biases in language, and moving forward I plan to find new methods to actively reduce bias in computational linguistics algorithms.

    招生官对面试的总结

    “杰瑞的面试不仅让他的学术兴趣更加凸显,还体现了他在机器学习项目和社会伦理方面的坚持与专注。他是未来可以推动公平 AI 发展的领导者之一。”

    杰瑞提到了他对语言学和机器学习的热情,同时表达了希望在斯坦福开展更高深研究的目标。他希望未来通过学术和研究解决因算法偏见导致的社会问题。

    斯坦福招生官总结:为什么杰瑞被录取?

    1. 思想活力 (IV) 与学习热情

    杰瑞表现出了非凡的求知欲,特别是在计算语言学和机器学习领域。他的申请材料反映了他对研究的强烈热情,以及超越课堂的探索精神。在他的个人论文中,他通过受乔治·奥威尔的《1984》启发,将语言学与计算机科学联系起来,讨论现代社会中的新闻偏见问题,这展现了他思维的深度。

    2. 卓越的学术表现与考试成绩

    杰瑞的 GPA 为 4.826(权重制),在高中中名列前茅。他的 SAT 成绩为 1560(阅读与写作 770,数学 790);SAT 科目考试数学二级满分 800,11 门 AP 考试全部取得满分。他在 10 年级修完高中数学课程后,又在社区大学完成高级数学课程,展现了他对学术的高度追求。

    3. 突破性的研究与课外活动的深度影响

    • 杰瑞通过开发 政治偏见新闻检测算法研究,分析了 20,000+ 新闻数据集,获得了 Intel 国际科学与工程博览会 (ISEF) 第 4 名。
    • 他还开发了 COVID-19 问答系统,该研究被邀请在顶尖计算语言学大会 ACL 上演讲。
    • 作为博主,他撰写了 20+ 篇语言学和机器学习的博文,总阅读量达 150,000,并获得了 “AI 顶级博主” 的荣誉称号。
    • 担任机器学习俱乐部主席,他组织和领导了关于人工智能在医疗健康与数据安全领域应用的讨论。

    4. 将学术与现实社会问题紧密结合

    杰瑞将语言学和计算机科学的学术研究与现实社会问题紧密结合,特别是在减少人工智能算法偏见和解决社会不公平方面。他在论文和短回答中提到过,他致力于通过 AI 技术推动社会公平发展,这与斯坦福注重社会道德和责任的价值观完美契合。

    5. 强大的个人故事与难忘的作文

    他的申请作文将学术深度与人格魅力巧妙结合。他的主文书以乔治·奥威尔的《1984》为引入点,探讨了语言与计算机科学的交集,同时展示了他对社会议题的洞察力。而他的“室友信”则从轻松幽默的角度展现了他的多面性,例如他对语音学、计算机科学的热情和力量举重的兴趣。

    6. 坚韧的毅力与领导力

    他通过担任机器学习俱乐部主席和模拟联合国副主席体现了杰出的领导能力。杰瑞的努力不仅影响了自己,也扩展到了身边的同学。例如,他将俱乐部参与会议的频率从 1 次增加到 5 次

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